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GM MASS RP: He Who Would be King

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Featuring Lord Gerald
the Kingly Candidates Lords 
RafeCiardairBiharMarec Ragnarok and Donnaghán 
and the rest of Glenmore!
Spring, Year 763 of the New Age
Glenmore, The New Oak



The icy chill that had heralded the coming of winter had lessened its hold, paving the way for spring to once more breathe life into the wood.  No snow had fallen for days, allowing the first of the grasses to bud their way through the lingering pale blanket.  The elegant crowns that the stags of Glenmore had worn through the fall and winter slowly began to fall away, the red lust of rut leaving their eyes as they prepared to raise the fawns that they had sired.  Does, their bellies swollen with the next generation, spent their time eating the best of the nutritious spring shoots, preparing for the arduous labors that awaited them.  The return of birdsong to the forests was uplifting, joining the echoes of fawnish laughter in the comforting melodies of spring.  

Yet the peace and quiet was marred, an underlying strain keeping the herd on edge and rendering the tranquility merely an armistice until the issue on everyone’s mind was addressed.

It was this tension that brought trickles of Glenmorians towards the Great Oak marking the center of their kingdom.  For it was now, at the turn of the season, the beginning of new life, that there would also be a new beginning for their kingdom.  For two seasons the herd had had no leader, no figurehead to follow, nor any stability.  However, this was but one of the factors playing into the palpable nervous energy now flowing through the air.  Like a gentle breeze, it caressed everyone, missing none with it’s soft touch.  Today, it whispered, tickling the ear of any willing to listen, today we shall once again have a King.

Months had been spent in preparation, and several worthy candidates had submitted themselves willingly to the scrutiny of the herd, humbling themselves before Óganach to lay claim the right to rule.  Each had to prove himself, to show that he did indeed have the characteristics only a true son of Earrann would possess.  First, in fealty, to have Lords stand at his side, proclaiming that they, too, would support that candidate’s platform.  Second, in magic, to show the purity of their power, for they would have to bring a dead tree back to life, and have it bear fruit, sweet and delectable to the palate.  Third, in strength, to test each candidate against one another in honorable battle, to see who could stand above the rest and prove his abilities in combat.  And lastly, each candidate was to present his heir, a token of the generation to come, a sign of what Glenmore’s distant future could be.

Each of these had been tried and weighed, their measure calculated accordingly.  Each candidate was worthy in their own way, but in the end, there could only be one to rise.

* * * * *

Gerald had been informed that the Royals had gathered. They were waiting, nervous and excited, to hear the announcement that he had to bring - and so he had left the Tree of Kings in his son’s capable hooves, and strode calmly to the Royal Glade.

“My Lords, my Ladies,” the elderly stag called, turning to look around the clearing at the Royals gathered there, “it is time that a new King is chosen, for what is a Kingdom without a King to lead it?”

There were murmurs from the crowd as he paused, the gathered fawnlings agreeing with the old Lord’s sentiment, but increasingly frustrated with the wait. They had been without a leader now for months, must they wait any longer?

“Six fine stags have asked that they be placed upon the throne. Each one would have been worthy, for they are strong leaders all. Not all were close to the throne and not all had great magical prowess; some had questions over their past behaviour. All, however, were followed by stags in noble standing and all had support from you Lords and Ladies of Glenmore.”

He paused again, smiling benevolently towards each of the six candidates in turn. He had no preference for who would be King, but the tournament had given him - and others, for he had discussed the final decision at length with his son and grandson - the knowledge to select Glenmore’s next ruler.

This pause went on for longer than the first, and the grumblings were increasing - but Gerald ignored them, as was his way, and simply continued on as he had before.

“Our new ruler will need strength and courage, he will need the magic to give us food through the winter and he must have the support of you of the Royal family. Of course, he must sprout himself from the Tree of Kings and bear the strong acorns of the future. Once he is crowned, he must rule with a firm hoof but a kind one. He must decide the fate of those whose fate is in question.”

The grumblings were nearly an uproar now. A decision had been made, must they wait to hear it from this lowliest of Lords?!

“It is with pride,” Gerald continued, his voice increasing to cover the grumblings from the Royals, “that I announce to you that our new King is to be Lord Rafe!”

* * * * *

He had stood by them all, waiting, anticipating, trembling- to hear the news, to hear who would be crowned King.  Through all the nerves, though all the struggles, the small victories, the losses, he had stood through it all, stagnant, solid, stoic.  But now, as Gerald spoke, everything within him trembled.  It took all of his strength to hold himself steady.  As the crowd rumbled, as the Lord of Families spoke those fateful words, it seemed the world stopped, the sound passing through his ears as if in slow motion.  ". . .our new King is to be Lord Rafe!"

A single exhale, a sigh of relief.  A sigh of sheer disbelief.  A high pitched ring droned in his ears, and Rafe turned to look out over the crowd before him, his herd.  His.  By Oganach's antlers. . . he had done it.

He had done it.

In those four words were more meaning than the stag could describe.  He'd done it.  He'd made it to the top, achieved that which he had thought unachievable, that which his father had said he could never have.  

Though he saw what was before him, none of it was coherent, until he felt warmth brush against his side, a calm voice reassuring that which he could not yet grasp. "All hail the King," Iminye murmured.  And with those words rushed the mass of voices, as the herd voiced their congratulations, and a few calls of triumph.  Taking it all in, his eyes missed few.

The whoop of exuberant joy that came from Riddick rushed through Rafe's ears, and a call of his own nearly joined it, and he certainly shared his eldest son's elation.  "Long live the King!"

The boom of Zoltan's laughter rolled through Rafe's supporters, the rare sound of joy from the stag elating the new King, and he felt his heart leap rapidly into beating hopefully.  Would the herd accept him?  From all sides, there were calls of "All hail the King!" In those voices were Carnarion, the roan lord whom he had so long ago chased.  Owain and Fionnuala were there also, and he saw the golden princess mouth words, her young son clinging to her legs.  And Adrian, the reserved cousin of his, whose muzzle simply broadened in a smile of success, one that Rafe soon mirrored.  Lorik was a mirror of the larger stag, dipping his head in acknowledgement of their victory.  However, Knox, nearby whooped with joy, a sound very similar to the one Riddick had not long ago loosed.

Nearby stood his harem, their faces alight as many of them realized that their children could be princes or ladies, sons and daughters of the new era of Glenmore, members of the royal family.  All of this he saw written on Anne's elegant golden features, and the tiniest of smirks twerked his lips.  Next to her, Asta, swollen with pregnancy and closely followed by her hoofmaiden, called "Long live the King!"

Next, his eyes moved to the supporters and followers of the other candidates, closely watching how they reacted to glean how he might be able to gain their favor, making a mental note to visit each as soon as he could.  Though there was hesitation, he saw no outward signs of defiance.  Lingering longer, his eyes glanced over his distant cousin, Alette and her betrothed Hrothgar, both of respectable blood and status.  The princess dipped  her head, and the Lord did the same, adding with it his own congratulations, their dappled hoofmaiden adding her own not far behind.  Not far to the side was young Weylin, a son of his supporters who had taken his chances with Donnaghan, and his own congratulations were added to the mix, though they were now lost in the sea of voices.  At the front of the crowd stood a stoic Solomon, though he offered no congratulations, he appeared content.  Rafe nodded.  He knew he liked the chestnut Lord for a reason.

Among the guards there were Caderyn, who called "Hail to the new King!" without much hesitation.  Lingering for a moment on the large, dark bay, he considered the fact that he would soon need to appoint a new Captain, a true Captain.  With those thoughts he turned to look at the pale Guard whom had more recently pledged his allegiances, Lunemyr, a valuable asset, despite his pale coat.  He'd been proud to achieve his support, and to find that he remained loyal to the traditions of Glenmore despite connections to those who had fled behind Drustan's tail.  Melark stood similarly nearby, though Rafe knew little of him besides that which he had heard from the gossip passing around the herd.  Rafe's gaze passed over Aeker as he swooped low in a bow, before turning to resume his duties.

There were many others that added their congratulations among the royals and the commoners, a few of those he noted, though he didn't recognize many of the lower class, he knew the circles they traveled in.  From Lady Ysbal, came "All hail the new King.  May he live and prosper."  From Elinor, a doe in Knox's harem, was a bow.  A pale commoner caught his eye, though the doe gave no reactions.  And he only caught a glimpse of the pelt of Huisha, a previous member of Drustan's counsel as he slipped away through the crowd. . .

And finally, he turned to his fellow candidates, though what he expected from them he wasn't completely sure.  There was only one reaction he watched closely, the others fading into the background.  Donnaghan was in utter disbelief of what had occurred, it was evident in the widening of his eyes, the shakiness of the bow that proceeded his outward acceptance of the news.  The newly crowned King could not deny that he found satisfaction in the reaction, for under his rule and reign, those charged of crimes would face appropriate punishment for his actions.  Donnaghan, and those surrounding him now, were all in limbo, their ranks and positions now suspended until he could make a decision.  Nuala. . . the princess who had been wrongfully claimed back by the Exiled Prince, stood behind him, a shell of a doe, the feathers that used to adorn her being long gone.  And his does, Ylva, Magpie, the others. . . their hoofmaidens, like the one he saw in shock behind the group, would be unsure until he spoke.

And that was when it hit him.  His word was law.  His words now held power, true, just, and right.

And he stepped forwards, raising his head to the herd, wishing that his rack had not yet fallen from his head.  "Thank you," he began, scanning the mass of Glenmores before him.  "Thank you, Glenmore.  As I promised those who swore fealty to me at the beginning of these trials, I now promise to all of you:  there is a brighter future ahead of us, one free of the changed that we had forced upon us.  I have a plan for Glenmore, I have a vision to restore it to the glory it once held.  I promise all of you, that together, we will restore Glenmore."
"Leaders become great, not because of their power, but because of their ability to empower others."
-John Maxwell

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PART ONE || The Announcement: here
PART TWO || Coronation: coming soon! 
(corronation ceremony will be happening the day after the announcement!  Be prepared to pretty up your characters 8D


The first of a series of Mass RPs is here! 8D Many thanks to femalefred for providing Gerald's words and POV, and strideroo for helping me get this all typed out, and the mods for keeping my thoughts organized :'D (and reading my drafts and ideas xD)  And to TigressDesign for letting me use her format for this!

This first RP focusses around the reactions of the herd to the official announcement of Glenmore's new King! 8D  Absolutely every character of every rank can participate and everyone can be here!!  

Lord Gerald has gathered the candidates together, and they may all be standing before the herd if the players so wish or in the crowd amongst their supporters!  The herd may be standing before the Oak or in the general area!  Do whatever you wish, friends 8D 

To leave your character's response, please reply to THIS FEATURED COMMENT with no more than 350 words and a link to your character's profile (king candidates may do more, as I'd love to include their entire POV, if the players wish!), and I'll collate the responses and include the most poignant/explosive ones in the next part! Concentrate on outward action/speech in your replies to this thread, inward thought won't be seen by others, but all Fawnlings' action is relevant as other Fawnlings may be reacting to yours! Please note I might not be able to fit all of them in to the next summary, particularly if it's unlikely for the herd to see/hear the response, but everyone is very welcome/encouraged to use this RP as a base for their own RPs based on it where inward thought will be very important!




Original text here!

Thanks to everyone who participated! 8D  I'm so sorry it took so long, and forgive me for my awful writing!  THIS WAS AWESOME GUYS I'm literally so stoaked that you all replied 8D


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this was fun XD on to the next :p